Leaving Kids Home Alone Yes or No?

WALT use ethos, pathos and logos in a persuasive writing. 

I absolutely believe that children under the age of 14 should always be with their parents when going out. Parents say kids are responsible, trustworthy and smart yet the government’s law is that only kids 14 and older can be trusted to be alone at  home.

First of all it is law. Parents that fail to follow this law can face 10 years in jail. Leaving kids alone can cause suffering or injury to health of the child. I believe that in the event that parents need to go out, they must be no longer than 15 minutes away and the child must know how to get help.  

Secondly a caution about leaving children at home without adult supervision  is the fact that someone could break into the house. The burglar could hurt the child. The burglar could kidnap the child. The child could try and fight back and get seriously injured .

Finally there is always the risk that the unsupervised  child could  do something dumb, stupid or irresponsible. The child might get hungry and try make some food and get burned or burn something. The kid might brake something e.g glass, something sharp and get hurt trying to clean it up. The child might try to do something they’re not allowed to do.

Children under the age of 14 should always be with their parents when going out. The government’s law is that “no one under 14 can be alone at home without a parent” and the consequence of failing to uphold this law can be very serious.

Facebook

WALT persuade people on our view of Facebook for people under 13. 

I truly believe having a Facebook account is terrible. Facebook is bad, Facebook is awful, Facebook is against the law.

People will post things we should not see. They will type bad language to you. They will put things no one wants to see on your wall. Your friend will think you're rude.  They will unfriend you. You will have no one to share things with. The people who unfriend you might tell other people and tell more and more people. Then people you don’t know they will think you’re rude too.

If you have a Facebook you will have no privacy. If you put in your address strangers will come to your house. People might use the information against you. If you take a picture of something in your house and put in your address with it they might go there and take it. Kids that don’t like you might tell other people. Some kids that are are jealous of you might blackmail you with the information.

 

If you have a Facebook account there might be a change people might block  you from  your account. While you are blocked they might hack into your account and copy some private things. They might also stalk you. Your enemies might put rumors on your wall while you're blocked. They might put in rumors that is true about you. Some people will think it’s true.

Your friends will turn on you if you have an account.  It will only make strangers came to your house. If you get blocked it won't be any good having an account. 

Factory

WALT persuade people to build a factory on our courts.

I believe it's brilliant if they build the factory.

If they build the factory it will be good for our community  It will increase their business. Also they will have a big area to work in. More people get jobs. It will be a new start for people with no jobs. If they have a job they will get money.

They will help us by providing us with CCTV. CCTV will be on for 24/7 hours. We will feel more safe at school. Everyone will have more protection. They will also provide us with fencing. We will have more security.

They will also provide us with a playground. We will be able to design it what ever we want. We could design it with courts. It will new and free. If we run around the playground we will be exercising. If we exercise we will be keeping fit and healthy.

If they build the factory we will get a new playground, more security and it will be better for our community.

To Persuade

In room 5 WALT is to use a mind map to make is to make a proper structure of a persuading text. I know I have done this when I have a thesis, 3 reasons, 3 facts for each reasons and a conclusion.